How to write a positioning line people remember
Write a line that tells a stranger what you sell and who it is for in three seconds and test it before it goes on the homepage.
Your homepage does not say what you sell
The headline reads something like empowering businesses through innovative solutions. It took a week to agree and three people are proud of it. A buyer who lands from a search has no idea whether you sell software accounting or office furniture and they leave to find out somewhere clearer.
A positioning line has one job. A stranger reads it once and can then say what you do and who it is for. That is the whole specification. Everything else people want from the line such as warmth ambition and rhythm is optional and usually arrives at the cost of the main job.
What it costs you and what it cannot buy
A positioning line will not be remembered by the market. Recall across a population is bought with repeated paid exposure over years and that is a media budget rather than a writing exercise. What a good line earns is comprehension at the moment of first contact. Judge it on that and nothing else.
In money it is almost free. In decisions it is expensive because a line that includes everyone excludes nothing and therefore says nothing. You have to give something up in writing. The other real cost is reapplication. The line sits on the website the decks the Google Business description the LinkedIn page the email signature and the proposal cover. Changing it later means changing all of them and most businesses update two and forget the rest.
Who does not need one
A plumber in Pune does not need a positioning line. That business needs the words plumber and Pune a phone number and a review count. A clever phrase in that slot actively reduces calls because it displaces the two words the buyer was scanning for. The same is true of any single service business in an obvious local category.
A business selling five unrelated things to five audiences should also stop. There is no honest umbrella line for a firm that does recruitment software and interior fit-outs and the search for one always ends in a vague abstraction that helps none of the five. Position each unit separately on its own page instead. The exercise pays off in crowded categories where every competitor looks the same in a new category that needs explaining and wherever you charge more than the obvious alternative.
How to actually write it
Start with the category noun. Use the word a buyer would type rather than the word your industry prefers. A buyer searches payroll software and never searches human capital enablement platform. Then add the audience with enough specificity to exclude someone. Then add one claim you can defend if challenged.
Write thirty lines and expect twenty-seven to be useless. Then run two tests. The first is the competitor test. Read each line and ask whether your three closest rivals could put their name on it. If they could delete it. The second is the stranger test. Read the survivor aloud to someone outside your industry and ask them to tell you what you sell and what you do not sell. Their answer is your result. Keep the winner under about twelve words and keep every internal word out of it.
Judging it honestly
The test that matters is comprehension by people who owe you nothing. Run the stranger test on five people and count how many describe your business correctly. Then watch the mix of inbound enquiries over the following months. A sharper line produces fewer enquiries and a higher share of them being the right kind. Falling enquiry volume alongside rising proposal win rate is the line working rather than failing.
The flattering measure is the meeting. Lines that sound impressive to the people who wrote them tend to be abstract and abstraction is what the stranger test punishes. Internal voting flatters for the same reason.
The mistake that costs the most
Most businesses write an aspiration instead of a position. We make work joyful describes a feeling and leaves the buyer to work out the category on their own. Few will bother. The line then has to be explained by a paragraph underneath it which means the paragraph is doing the job and the line is decoration taking up the most valuable space on the page.
The second failure is committee editing. Each stakeholder adds the word that protects their division until the line covers everything and commits to nothing. Give one person the pen and the authority to refuse additions.
Put it everywhere or do not bother
A line only compounds through repetition in the places buyers meet you. The homepage hero the Google Business Profile description the LinkedIn tagline the email signature the proposal cover and the first sentence a salesperson says on a call. Keep a list of those surfaces beside the line itself. Half the value of positioning work is lost to businesses that change the website and leave the old phrase sitting in six other places.
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